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Tuesday, 17 March 2015

Walking and walking, she would not know where to go all She knew was home was gone.
It had been days since the tornado had passed through taking lives and reeking havoc. But
all she knew was it was just the start of something big, much bigger that would be the end of everything, It would flatten everything like a tank.

1 comment:

  1. This is very powerful writing, Zach. I am impressed with the way you used the simile 'flattened everything like a tank.' It is a very effective final line.